Help me make I-129 Supplement Q34a concise please! :)

[janandmatt 2]

After extensive reading it seems the general rule of thumb is to keep the answer to I-129 Supplement Question 34a short and sweet. I've tried to include just the relevant information, but it still seems confusing and too long to me. Any help/advice is much appreciated!

Janet and I met online in 2009. We communicated nearly everyday since through instant messenger and voice/video chat.

I traveled to Canada to meet her in person on June 7, 2010. I stayed in Canada with her until October 6, 2011.

During that time we traveled together to visit my family in the USA on 07/2010 and 10/2010 for a week each time.

She traveled to the USA spend time with me and my family during Christmas and New Year's of 2011 and 2012.

I traveled to Canada in 11/2012 for a week before returning to Canada to live with her from 02/2013 to 02/2016.

She has traveled to the USA for a week in 04/2016 and 06/2016 to visit me and my family.

I feel like I'm using the word traveled way too much. I think the first paragraph is okay, but the second one gets confusing.

I included that the dates of her visit in June 2016 because we are planning on sending this off after that visit.

Any criticism welcome!

[Georgia16 2,858]

You don't need to ad it... Just write on the line when you met and then you can add your evidence to the package. I made a timeline on a paper over our visits (not needed either) to give an overview over all our visits.

[Fr8dog 396]

I have a feeling I had the shortest sentence ever. I just entered;

"We met in (year) at (location) in (state)."

I just answered the question and never thought about giving the whole timeline.

[janandmatt 2]

I have a feeling I had the shortest sentence ever. I just entered;"We met in (year) at (location) in (state)."I just answered the question and never thought about giving the whole timeline.

Thank you and Georgia16 for your replies. I agree with you that shorter is better and will add the more specific timeline stuff to the picture portion.

Would it be best to add proof (bus tickets/receipts) in the same section as pictures?

For example pic of us on date and then proof of being in the country at that date next to the corresponding picture?

[Georgia16 2,858]

Thank you and Georgia16 for your replies. I agree with you that shorter is better and will add the more specific timeline stuff to the picture portion.

Would it be best to add proof (bus tickets/receipts) in the same section as pictures?

For example pic of us on date and then proof of being in the country at that date next to the corresponding picture?

Really doesn't matter if you put picture first on the travlling first as long as it's both there

[baron555 934]

After extensive reading it seems the general rule of thumb is to keep the answer to I-129 Supplement Question 34a short and sweet. I've tried to include just the relevant information, but it still seems confusing and too long to me. Any help/advice is much appreciated!

Janet and I met online in 2009. We communicated nearly everyday since through instant messenger and voice/video chat.

I traveled to Canada to meet her in person on June 7, 2010. I stayed in Canada with her until October 6, 2011.

During that time we traveled together to visit my family in the USA on 07/2010 and 10/2010 for a week each time.

She traveled to the USA spend time with me and my family during Christmas and New Year's of 2011 and 2012.

I traveled to Canada in 11/2012 for a week before returning to Canada to live with her from 02/2013 to 02/2016.

She has traveled to the USA for a week in 04/2016 and 06/2016 to visit me and my family.

I feel like I'm using the word traveled way too much.

More than that, too many words period.....see below for my recommendation.

I think the first paragraph is okay, but the second one gets confusing.

I included that the dates of her visit in June 2016 because we are planning on sending this off after that visit.

Any criticism welcome!

Janet and I met online in 2009. We communicated nearly everyday since and have visited each other numerous times. For the last visit,

she traveled to the USA for a week in 04/2016 and 06/2016 to visit me and my family.

Provide evidence of this last meeting only.

Thank you and Georgia16 for your replies. I agree with you that shorter is better and will add the more specific timeline stuff to the picture portion.

Would it be best to add proof (bus tickets/receipts) in the same section as pictures?

For example pic of us on date and then proof of being in the country at that date next to the corresponding picture?

I'd group the evidences per visit.

[Fr8dog 396]

Thank you and Georgia16 for your replies. I agree with you that shorter is better and will add the more specific timeline stuff to the picture portion.

Would it be best to add proof (bus tickets/receipts) in the same section as pictures?

For example pic of us on date and then proof of being in the country at that date next to the corresponding picture?

Again I kept it simple on this one.

- I-94 and entry stamps showing when I was in the country during the last 2 years.

- Flight Itinerary for these flights.

- His and her bank statements, highlighting the withdrawal's and payments made in the same area of the country.

- No pics, because we didn't have any of us both together (I hate pictures)

[janandmatt 2]

I'd group the evidences per visit.

Thank you for your helpful reply! I was over thinking it and I agree that for 34a it will be best to note the visit now and one upcoming in June!